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There are a number of ways that the teachers at Thinking Factory help their Secondary English students on their journey to becoming good essay writers.
After learning how to analyse essay questions , Tr Rachael will now show you how to create vivid essays.
How to write good essays ?
In this video, our Secondary 2 teacher, Teacher Rachael will explain to students how they can make their stories come alive. With the help of a model essay ‘A great disappointment ’, Teacher Rachael will teach students the structure of a narrative plot and what are the features of a good narrative. You may download the handout before watching the video.
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If you would like more practice on narrative writing, come join us for our weekly lessons.
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2023 Bukit Timah Branch Secondary English tuition timetable
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S1 SAT 2 pm 4 pm
S2 SAT 4 pm 6 pm
S3 SAT 6 pm 8 pm
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